Monday, November 11, 2013

"The Metaphor" -Poem Reflection by Charlotte


The Matches

Miss Hancock was a box of matches
She set everything on fire
She has illuminated my life

As time passed by
She used up all the matches she had
To bring us the intelligence and dream

Miss Hancock was described as old fashioned
Therefore I thought matches were too ancient
And just like others, I tried to get a lighter

She was desperate, disappointed
She was trying to present to us what she had
However she seemed to be too immature

She was the best choice
But only for our childhood
Safe and secure, we will never be harmed

I never thought that her fire would be extinguished
I tried to light her up again
It didn’t work successfully like I thought it would be

I was desperate, regretted
I was trying to present to her that I have grown up
However she will never be awakened again

She offered me the power to believe in myself
She offered me the ability to have dream
She offered me the courage to fight for it

Miss Hancock was like a box of matches
Who was strong enough that could ignite itself
And turned out to be the firework in the sky 

1 comment:

  1. effective metaphor with the matches. keep up the good work!

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